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Eternal Peace
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 08:46:47 AM in AEST
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Eternal Peace
I have asked for forgiveness from those I’ve wronged in my life
I have said good-bye to my kids and my wife
It is time this old warrior takes his final sleep
Lay me within the earth, dark and deep
Each time I entered a battle I would always pray
Lord, please let me live to fight another day
However, this time I knew I would not be victorious
This enemy has become the most notorious
To spare disgrace and humility upon my battered self
My sword and dagger I placed quietly upon a shelf
No human weapons are needed where I go
This is something everyone should know
As I make my way to the new place I will call home
I will look over all of the land on which I used to roam
Seeing people from this view is amazing, I pray you all have the same belief
I wish for each of you at your chosen time the same eternal peace
Deadwriter
04/14/2009
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Re: Eternal Peace
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 09:38:58 AM AEST
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NIcely done and I'm sure you would have eternal peace...but this old warrior ain't going nowhere in a hurry!!
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Re: Eternal Peace
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 02:19:20 PM AEST
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very well written. but i have to agree with jenni that this old warrior still has a bit of fight left in him. Just remember i am here if you need to talk.
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Re: Eternal Peace
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by TeRrahiel on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 03:03:51 AM AEST
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| Definitely a moving poem. |
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Re: Eternal Peace
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by JuniorWise on
Sunday, 26th April 2009 @ 08:16:25 AM AEST
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| wow...that was really good |
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