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come back mommy
Contributed by
lostforgood
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Mommy
It hurts so bad
I have become so sad
You have left me though
And now my pain does flow
Mommy
I am so scared
When I cried everyone stared
Every night I sit alone
It seems like your heart has turned to stone
Mommy
I took the pills
Now I'm getting the chills
My stomach really aches
Please hear my cries for gosh sakes
Mommy
I cry my silent tears
Because of how I fear
You will come to yell at me
If you ever came and see
Mommy
My heart is racing
And soon death I'll be facing
I cannot stand up anymore
So I'm just laying on the floor
Mommy
Why did you let me become this way
Why couldn't you have stayed
I've taken my last pills now
And it's finally time to say chow
But mommy
Please come back to me
I wish that you would choose to see
Just how bad I've came to be
Because now I have to leave
Copyright ©
lostforgood
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2003-03-26 02:45:00]
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Re: come back mommy
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 06:25:49 AM AEST
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| Sad poem. much pain is seen. venkat |
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Re: come back mommy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:38:57 AM AEST
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This is so sad. Such emotion. Very good writing.
sleepless_siren |
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Re: come back mommy
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by M on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 12:00:51 PM AEST
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| This is so sad, i'm gonna cry. On the actually poem part, i'm not sure if i like some of the rhyme, but it doesn't take away from the poem, which, like i said, is really sad. I'm sorry whatever it is that made you write it happened. xXx |
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Re: come back mommy
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:09:21 PM AEST
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| ach, this so sad, i have to disagree with the comment above, i think the way the poem is written helps ontribute to the atmosphere of the poem |
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Re: come back mommy
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by Percursors on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:16:00 PM AEST
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| this is a really good poem... |
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Re: come back mommy
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 02:08:39 PM AEST
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| Fantasicly written |
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