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nightly walk
Contributed by
crmnlilbruno
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Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 11:29:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Only the moon and the stars giving off light
Walking down the road in the middle of the night
A brisk northern wind brushing against my face
Head tilted back staring off in space
Crickets in the grass singing there song
Listening to it all as I walk along
Road made of dirt going around a lake
This is the rout that I like to take
Fish splashing away just right off shore
Head swinging to the side looking for more
The Waters wavy rippling the light of the moon
Almost home on this night in June
I take this walk every night before bed
Its a beautiful walk even if its only in my head
A single memory could help one sleep
This is the one I use and the one I keep.......
Aaron D. Carman
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crmnlilbruno
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2009-04-14 23:29:57]
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Re: nightly walk
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by shanat on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 11:46:59 PM AEST
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that was absolutly fantastic!!!!! have read it 3 or 4 times already, im jelous, keep up the brilliant work:)))) 5/5
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Re: nightly walk
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 12:13:41 AM AEST
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| Peaceful..it is like the loveliness of moonshine.. please write more:-)venkat |
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Re: nightly walk
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 05:46:28 AM AEST
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| lovely Little write here., very simplistic with nice ideas and i commend you for that. nice imagery also which is what i always look for., i like how it was a memory you use to just get away from it all, or maybe its to get asleep lol, anyway good write and keep up the work OK!! |
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Re: nightly walk
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 02:52:25 PM AEST
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A beautiful write...love the concept...
Jenni |
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Re: nightly walk
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 06:57:40 AM AEST
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you used some first class imagery in this one, well done.
-Phil |
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