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Blade to my Stomach Lining
Contributed by
amber_vonHorror
on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 10:37:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I can feel
The lining of my stomach.
Its vessels bursting.
It's aching. Softly.
Sorely.
Yesterday I held an empty bottle
It felt so light in my hands
I pushed my palms together so hard
I cut myself, on the glass
The poison is the summer
Takes away the pain of the season
The time for coats. and colds.
The time for blankets. And hurting
To be alone.
If looks could kill
Well, my mirror would be in pieces
And my heart.
Not beating.
And my addiction
More hidden.
And my voices.
Softer spoken.
And my insides.
So broken
If God granted us three wishes
I'd wish on only one thing
The wish to disappear
The wish to not exist.
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amber_vonHorror
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2009-04-14 22:37:13]
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Re: Blade to my Stomach Lining
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 10:43:25 PM AEST
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I remember you telling me something about your poems but I can't remember what it was exactly...
This poem I liked a lot though. I have to addmit I loved the stanaza before last most
as always get poem although the subject hasn't fully hit my muse yet
hope to read more soon
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Re: Blade to my Stomach Lining
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 02:29:19 PM AEST
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so sad... :(
but i liked it |
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Re: Blade to my Stomach Lining
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by wood on
Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 09:12:05 PM AEST
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good work. my only complaint is in theme ....i cant rap my mind around it. would like to see more from you,and keep in touch
~freshmen012 |
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Re: Blade to my Stomach Lining
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by InfinitePoet on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 05:04:28 PM AEST
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Man O Man!! how I can identify and agree with this so much!!! Just to cease to exist! would make it alll so much better!! Great write!! keep sharing!!
PepperMint! |
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