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My Morning Sun . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 12:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How often
i have often said
i love you with my
eyes,
my minds a book
you've often read
and came
to
realize.
That on the pages
of my life somewhere
between the
lines,
i found the beauty
of a wife
in all that love
defines.
How often
i have told me so
the things
that you already
know,
in which i'll keep
on telling you
until the day my life
is
through.
Oh
how often i have felt
what words cannot describe,
loving you this much
i'm almost scared to be
alive.
Like
every thing
you are to me
that started
from day one,
that girl who was
my moonlight is now,
my
morning
sun.
Ben
myheartsvoice
&
bjps
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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2009-04-14 12:14:56]
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Re: My Morning Sun . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 05:13:57 PM AEST
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i like the writing style, it flowed well. good work.
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Re: My Morning Sun . . . Ben
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by liamleash on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 07:09:04 PM AEST
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| I really like this. Great write. |
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Re: My Morning Sun . . . Ben
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 08:23:03 PM AEST
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NIce flow....well done as usual, Ben
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Re: My Morning Sun . . . Ben
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by crmnlilbruno on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 12:48:42 AM AEST
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| I would have to say hmm...... GREAT WRITE!! hehe... Keep up the good work, I loved it. |
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Re: My Morning Sun . . . Ben
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 06:46:25 AM AEST
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This is outstanding!!
Im not one for mush lol...and this was nowhere near it.Just simplistic beauty at its finest...raw honesty...straight from the heart...and yes I melted,just a touch *smiles*
Lovely! |
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