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Forever and Always
Contributed by
Scribbler
on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 09:56:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All day every day
Thoughts of you invade me
Memories of us break me
Tears of loss weaken me.
Each and every night
Fear of the future destroys me
Darkness of night chills me
Missing you leaves me empty.
Every waking second
I want you by my side
I want to kiss those lips
I want to hear that voice.
Sitting, crying, wishing.
I want my baby back.
I want you in my life.
I need to silence my soul
Forever and always.
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Re: Forever and Always
(User Rating: 1 )
by the-phoenix on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 12:37:43 PM AEST
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good job buddy...well done..
I found the first and second stanza very interesting and touching,,, but ummm.. the tone somewhat changes from the third one (My personal opinion)... anyways all in all you have done a great job... Keep up!
thanks....take a look at "In between", "No more question words", "you were never the second...."
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Re: Forever and Always
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 02:23:34 PM AEST
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'I want my baby back'
aww so sweet!
love it |
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