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The Life Starts Here
Contributed by
pandeyg9
on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 02:04:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can still remember your moist lips over my cheeks,
the time we used to make home of plastic bricks.
Your motherly armor around me, your gentle touch on my hair,
I miss every second of your care.
You holding my hands and our walk to school,
you cleaning my face when I would drool.
Your face so divine, your eyes so charming,
I promise you would always be my first darling.
your worrying wet eyes when i am late,
and after failing telling I was great.
I can never return the amount you loved me,
neither can give you the slightest you have given me.
Copyright ©
pandeyg9
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2009-04-14 02:04:44]
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Re: The Life Starts Here
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 02:18:26 AM AEST
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Very emotional, beautiful,
great write
and welcome to the site I usally have more to say but it is to late to think of something to say
hope to read more soon
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Re: The Life Starts Here
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 06:31:11 AM AEST
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How nice of you to start your poetic journey with such a sweet tribute to your mother.
God bless you long life. :-)venkat |
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Re: The Life Starts Here
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 11:00:53 AM AEST
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very nice, a fitting tribute to the love and affection of mothers everywhere. good job!
-Phil |
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Re: The Life Starts Here
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by the-phoenix on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 12:43:04 PM AEST
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I just went and kissed mom, thank you... what you wrote is fantastic... hope your mom is still with you and read, or listen to what you have written for her... thanks again... Brrrravvvo... Keep up!
Hugs...
Well done |
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