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Suicidal (Holding On)
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 10:16:00 PM in AEST
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Cut to the wrist
Pull of a trigger
Snap of the neck
It's not that different
In the end,
It makes no difference
A poison
Painted on my teeth
Burning
Deeper, and deeper
These scenes are rehearsed
Cliche stories
Told over and over
Addiction
Injected in my mind
Oh, to flirt with these ideas...
Just grazing the surface
With my tongue
Bleeding from the eyes
There is a secret
Woven in this
So hush, and listen...
Tiny whispers
From those you love
From the ones that hold you
Close to their heart
The hidden meaning is
You never act
On it
I am broken
I am not dead.
I feel lost
I am not alone
Love is my adrenaline
Keeping me alive
Hold on one second more,
This will be a bumpy ride...
To give up
Is not an answer at all
Hold onto all you have
Even when your fingernails are
Ripping, bleeding
As seducing as this venom is,
It would be selfish
To take it all
We look
And we look
Watching from afar
Wishing, wanting
Some of us dare to take a taste
A sip
And even some,
They drink it all
And the crowd starts to weep...
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Re: Suicidal (Holding On)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 11:11:02 AM AEST
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an incredibly powerful write, good work.
-Phil |
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Re: Suicidal (Holding On)
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by dhart420 on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 01:01:13 AM AEST
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| speaking as someone that has been down that road....it is a very good poem. real, it is a totally accurate representation of what can happen because of one preventable selfish act |
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Re: Suicidal (Holding On)
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by wood on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 04:51:51 PM AEST
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your peom got to me very nicetransitions were very smooth. keep going
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