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hope floats. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 07:31:48 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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like multi-coloured
confetti. . . upon the air
of expectancy
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-04-13 19:31:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: hope floats. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 07:41:02 PM AEST (User
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wonderful write
I like it made me smile
hope to read more soon
-kelly
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Re: hope floats. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 09:19:09 PM AEST (User
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I so like Haikus
Especially ones from you,
Poetess elite |
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Re: hope floats. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 07:35:22 AM AEST (User
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Let this multi coloured clouds- confetti shining in the evening twilight
let the hope may bring you the joy which you wish.
-venkat |
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Re: hope floats. . .
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 11:16:03 AM AEST (User
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superb, well done.
-Phil |
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