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In the cool September chill
Contributed by
3660days
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Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 03:38:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In the cool September chill
I caught you smiling ...
...and you, trying to deny my certain evidence
returned with your ever-defying, inquisitive glare,
pulling back your trembling lips
in vainless efforts not to laugh,
but laughed just the same.
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2009-04-13 03:38:03]
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Re: In the cool September chill
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 04:55:58 AM AEST
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hmm, i like this, very honest and beautiful, i felt the child like innocence but also a denial of feelings that really came out well, very well done fro such a short piece!!!
keep it up okay! |
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Re: In the cool September chill
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 12:25:51 AM AEST
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I like the poem itself but for the life of me I can't put it in words I have trouble with that sometimes it is a wonderful poem but at one point I think I get it the next I'm baffeled this has nothing to do with your writing skills it's just me not being able to comprehend some things
I do like the poem though short and yet it says something
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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