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Blowing Bubbles
Contributed by
windowguy
on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 01:14:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Carried on a soft whisper
Of a breeze
Little bubbles float aloft,
Delighting
Little children
With such simple pleasures;
A kaleidoscope of colours
Swirl around in circles
In rich fluidity
Of amethyst
And jade,
Sapphire
And gold;
Sadly, soon
Obliterated,
Erased out of existence.
Lips tremble,
But smiles
Return again
As soon as
Lips are pursed,
A gentle breath
Gives birth
To another
Gem of wonder -
A Bubble,
A Child’s rainbow globe;
Tenuous, momentary,
But a dream
Of beautiful fragility
That captivates
A sense of wonder.
Generations come and go
But this thrill will never die.
Copyright ©
windowguy
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2009-04-13 01:14:58]
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Re: Blowing Bubbles
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by mooshken26 on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 05:05:50 PM AEST
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This is excellent, it reminds me of my daughter's face when she first saw a bubble - the look of awe. I like the way you've described the colours that the bubbles form xx
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Re: Blowing Bubbles
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 06:43:31 PM AEST
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This is by far, the best poem I have read here tonight. It is amazing how you captured the bubbble-blowing experience of these kids. I could actually see the smiles on the faces of the young ones.
Thanks for sharing this...
Jenni.. |
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Re: Blowing Bubbles
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by Lilymaemax on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 12:00:53 PM AEST
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| I read this to my girls as they both get so much delight from blowing bubbles and they both laughed out loud as i read it too them.Thank you!!Lilymae |
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