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WHY?
Contributed by
GODS_HATED_ONE
on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 11:58:49 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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AS i waited in the dark the only thing in my world that brings me hope
All gone as she leaves she takes my heart with her
All the pain in this soul eating away at me slow consuming me
In this dark hole i call me life screaming for my life hoping wishing
She will come back will she come back who is to tell
There is one thing i know she consumed what was left of my battered soul
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Re: WHY?
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 10:28:25 PM AEST
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Painful write, well done, thanks for the read.
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Re: WHY?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 07:06:47 AM AEST
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Yes, this is very pain filled.
As for "why?", try not to let it consume you completely. Even if you get an answer, it may never satisfy. |
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