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My addiction
Contributed by
chlois
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Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 09:06:11 PM in AEST
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self-harmpoetry
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At times when im lost, you find me.
Your comfort, is what i'd die for.
The red flow, you leave behind.
The sensual feeling, i crave for.
Your sharp edges, what i need!
The joy you bring, mends my wounds.
The pink scar, your pleasure leaves.
My skin breaks, your sharp edges feel so good.
You are my addiction, My blade is my HEROIN!!
Copyright ©
chlois
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2009-04-12 21:06:11]
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Re: My addiction
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 09:18:54 PM AEST
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That's deep, thanks for the read.
The Phantom |
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Re: My addiction
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by RyhmeNotReason on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 09:24:25 PM AEST
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| I liked it.. many people wont really understand it, but those of us who do can really identify. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: My addiction
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 09:45:33 PM AEST
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Emotional poetry, deep as phantom says
but hopefully the addiction doesn't go to deep then you wouldn't beable to write more and I would miss out
hopefully this is just good poetry
remember everyone has someone they can turn to
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: My addiction
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by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 07:05:01 PM AEST
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it's good that you can get the thoughts off of your mind about this! This one will be identifiable best by those of us who have been where u are! Please keep writing and using it as an outlet! Take Care
always,
Peace!
PepperMint Ki$$e$~~* |
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Re: My addiction
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by Jen54 on
Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 08:45:22 PM AEST
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| It captured me with the first line. Written very well. I could relate to it. Keep it up! |
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Re: My addiction
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:48:01 AM AEST
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Unfortunately (for me) a blade is only one of my many addictions. I can relate to every single word of this.
-Kara |
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