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Cries of help
Contributed by
ammar
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Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 11:47:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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The stars heard
As did the seas
The cries of help
Carried far by the breeze
Though the hours pass
There’s no sunrise
So it would remain dark
Until this is realized:
Overcoming this darkness
Requires no might
But love and peace are what
Actually bring about light
Ignorant of this
Despite its sanity
And today so vulnerable
Crying for help is humanity
Copyright ©
ammar
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2009-04-12 11:47:55]
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Re: Cries of help
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 01:22:51 PM AEST
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Hmmmm.. interesting. A bit sad and somewhat profound. I think I might be missing something with that last stanza...so, yeah, probably just my inability to understand. It certainly provokes thoughts and has a pretty good flow.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Cries of help
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 06:14:55 PM AEST
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yep its all lost in translation through the ages.
But the message remains:
We must seek love by giving love so as to find love |
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Re: Cries of help
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by aidoman on
Friday, 7th August 2009 @ 02:15:29 AM AEST
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| smooth, it makes sense when its real |
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