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Round Two
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 02:37:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Round Two
To the victor goes the spoils, rub you down with baby oil,
Rose peddles and candle-light, some vintage wine on ice,
Small talk and a moonlight walk,
Holding hands, thoughts of love on the warm beach sand,
The moonlight our spotlight, emotions we can not fight,
Bodies entwine, two souls blend with one thought in mind,
The Earth shakes as subconscious barriers began to break,
Waves rush to meet the shore, climax so strong it rock us to the core,
Lying there catching our breath, you slowly rub your hand upon my chest,
A gentle kiss, those ruby lips I can’t resist,
In the distant a whale calls, as the warm summer rain begins to fall,
Holding each other close arouses us both,
The ocean spray mixed with salt set the mood for an emotional assault,
Your naked body lies in wait, like a gift from the Gods on a golden plate,
While the rain falls down, once again our bodies are bound,
So by the light of the moon we began round two.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2009-04-11 14:37:53]
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Re: Round Two
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by shelby on
Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 04:45:51 PM AEST
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MMM did I say spice? Yes a sensual and lovely write here.
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Re: Round Two
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by venkat on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 05:31:56 AM AEST
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Wow..absolutely beautiful.
"The Earth shakes as subconscious barriers began to break,
Waves rush to meet the shore, climax so strong it rock us to the core"..
I can see the rise of sensuous poet in the name of The_Phantom :-)venkat
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Re: Round Two
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 12:06:17 PM AEST
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A wonderfully beautiful song of lovers caught in love's embrace.
There is something quite delicate about the water's edge by moonlight.
And you've captured the allure and arousal she creates in all
who are delighted by her beauty and trapped in her attraction.
Lovely, lovely write.
~ Breezy
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Re: Round Two
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 08:30:50 PM AEST
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Oh Matt.. this is awesome... very sensual and warming... I enjoyed this immensely... and now....on to round three..:>)
Hugs
Jenni |
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