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Still in love with you
Contributed by
Urizen
on
Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 02:19:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Once again I am alone,
And once again I don't know what to do,
There's only one thing you must know
I'm still in love with you.
The air hangs heavy with dark clouds,
I'm scared, scared almost to move,
I whisper this secret to this adulterous wind,
That I'm still in love with you,
I wonder as I walk a pace,
And see the lovers bill and coo,
I wonder if we could be like that
'Cause I'm still in love with you
Someday when the Earth has stopped,
And the stars drip down like glue
If you were to ask me on that judgement day,
I'd say, I'm still in love with you
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2009-04-11 14:19:11]
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Re: Still in love with you
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 02:40:28 PM AEST
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I think we all have had that same feeling of love and it seems to never let go, thanks for the read.
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Re: Still in love with you
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by kye on
Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 10:08:17 PM AEST
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I truly enjoyed your poem. It was sweet, loving and tender. Since most of us have at one time, felt this way... I wonder if they know. At the time, when you have feelings for someone and they move on, I tend to think that they will never know what it is like. Just pondering your poem at the moment.
I especially liked the last stanza.
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Re: Still in love with you
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 09:01:24 AM AEST
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Really like this write,
especially.
Someday when the Earth has stopped,
And the stars drip down like glue
If you were to ask me on that judgement day,
I'd say, I'm still in love with you
Take care
Fuzzy
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