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by & by
Contributed by
elle
on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 07:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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applicably, we tried.
as time turned
seasons over
in its' mind. . .
we lingered, you. . . I.
we lavished in perpetuality
with no measure
of the distance
in the wind-swept,
evening sky. . .
& within a cloud-laced veil,
cynical witness
transformed,
strays mystified.
what trance?
. . . mere concentration?
nay. . . a songbird pause.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-04-10 19:25:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: by & by
(User Rating: 1 ) by kye on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 08:21:05 PM AEST (User
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You have this way of painting postcard moments with the imagery of words.
Your words, structure and emotion are phenomenal.
Kie |
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Re: by & by
(User Rating: 1 ) by crmnlilbruno on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 08:26:44 PM AEST (User
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Another great Elle write... Good job |
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Re: by & by
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 12:18:56 AM AEST (User
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I love your poetry. |
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Re: by & by
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 01:43:32 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful and very creative.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: by & by
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 08:02:47 AM AEST (User
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Elle,
Out of all of you writes that I have read,
This piece is by far, my favorite. Your
wording captivates the reader and the
last line brings it all together.
Awesome write.........Mike |
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