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I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 11:25:25 PM in AEST
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I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
You may ask how I know this
because you may see my face
but all memory of you seeing me will erase
My face might as well be a empty space
I''m a blank slate, nameless in the human race
I wonder place to place
but no one will every remember my face
I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
Always to be remembered as a blank slate in the human race
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Re: I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 12:32:57 AM AEST
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do you mean wander?
otherwise it's pretty good |
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Re: I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 03:01:55 AM AEST
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I suppose I do mean wander
I don't really know I come from a place where spelling isn't highly marked my grammar isn't all that great
but yes I suppose I do mean wander |
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Re: I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 04:50:43 AM AEST
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| yes intriguing work here, i think the flow could be better but i did like the mystery from this piece, like a fable or something, keep writing!!! |
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Re: I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
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by elle on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 06:29:03 AM AEST
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This seems to me to be a very moving piece, invoking thoughts & feelings for say the
homeless, destitute & a host of other categories of humanity that could fill that
blank. I don't know if you had any of this in mind but I'll carry a thought & try to serve
some helpful purpose today simply because you inspired me. Thanks. peace. elle |
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Re: I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 12:38:06 PM AEST
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So, if you're the wandering nomad where no one will remember your face, how did Kelly know about you? ;-) j/k
Anywho, quite thought provoking. Like elle says, I am wondering if it is a matphor for the homeless. Much to ponder.
Tim |
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Re: I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 07:36:34 PM AEST
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interesting writing, good work.
-Phil |
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Re: I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
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by kismetkills on
Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 12:01:54 AM AEST
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| it's cool, nice job. |
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Re: I am the wondering nomad of the nameless
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by 3660Days on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 01:15:43 AM AEST
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| I love your imagery, but once again I am no big fan of sing-songy dr. seuss rhyme schemes. But seriously, some of this imagery is very nice, great concept. |
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