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The Other Side of Unrequited
Contributed by
-glued--together-
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Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 09:38:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I finally had forgotten
The closet door was shut
The skeleton promised never to show again
Yet always whispered threats of “what if” and “but”
I cant imagine life without you
But cannot utter your name
Even a silly phrase of yours
Is bound to cause me pain
Your message beat and threw me
Into a suffocating, dark abyss
I lied all through the exit
Cause its you I’ll always miss
I cant do anything but regret this
The feelings are still there
Never want to see your face again
But that’s something I cant bear
Ive always wanted to love you
But its something I cant do
So we repeated the all too well-known lines
Its me, my friend, not you
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-glued--together-
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2009-04-09 21:38:26]
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Re: The Other Side of Unrequited
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 05:26:02 PM AEST
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I really like the way you conveyed that ol' feeling that I am sure many of us have dealt with....that fight within ourselves of we want to remember but then don't; we want to love them but then don't. Well expressed and it flowed along pretty good too.
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Re: The Other Side of Unrequited
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 07:26:13 PM AEST
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| thats a good way of showing you're tired of something. |
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