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just thinkinng again
Contributed by
apartment213
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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comepletely desperate asking for a little help
no one knows why these pills taste so sweet
forced to be a loser and fall short at every turn
thanks dad for having a temper
thanks dad for cursing me with ur name
no wonder im always mad im just like u
we look alike so i hate myself please take it back
mom keeps on loving u loving to hate u
i wish u were dead forgetting u would be easy
i would only lose the better part of a life
19 and dont remember the last happy family outing
blood stains dont come out that easy
blood stains dont come out that easy
blood stains dont come out that easy
blood stains dont come out that esy
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Re: just thinkinng again
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:34:47 PM AEST
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OMG! Kenny, this was a great write. you were wrong to say it wasn't. Keep writing, you write so well and you need to get these emotions out. Write them out, my friend.
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Re: just thinkinng again
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:41:47 AM AEST
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OMG Such a brilliant poem. I know this feeling. If you ever need to talk, PM me.
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Re: just thinkinng again
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by Gribba on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:13:06 PM AEST
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| WOW!!! I love this, I can so relate! wow!!! |
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Re: just thinkinng again
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by wazarov on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 01:04:29 AM AEST
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| no doubt of the poetic beauty but my friend u have to make peace with life |
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Re: just thinkinng again
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:04:11 PM AEST
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kenny, wow...i've been away for awhile and look what you have for me when i get back...it's brilliant, the best one of yours i've read yet. i want to know where you get your passion, cuz it shows... i'll see you around
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