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sanctuary
Contributed by
elle
on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 07:25:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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your voice, a chapel
for my mind, I want. . . I need
I must. . . enter in.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-04-09 07:25:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: sanctuary
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loende on
Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 06:16:40 PM AEST (User
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You know...I have a hard time with Haiku. It's so hard to find something worthwhile to say in so few words, sometimes. My hat's off to you though. Not only did you nail it, you did it with style. I especially liked the "open" look to it, with the punctuation. It was really lovely.
Be well,
~Loende |
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