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My Hearts Last Beat
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 06:24:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My Hearts Last Beat
My voice cries out in silent pleas
Everyone passes, yet no one sees
My heart is near its final beat
There is someone new I have to meet
Not much time left to do my deeds
I still have unplanted seeds
The mission that was placed within my care
Was for me alone, though some tried to share
Their help for which I will be always glad
They never knew how much influence they had
Now as my heart slows to forever stop
I do not want them to think I forgot
A few more beats is al I have left in time
Believe me when I say the pleasure was all mine
As the final pulses thump in my chest
I know I have given life my best
Deadwriter
04/08/2009
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Re: My Hearts Last Beat
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 07:23:23 AM AEST
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As so many said to me when I was, at what seemed my lowest, I hope that this is just writing and that it isnt going to be put into action. This was a great piece of writing dont get me wrong but just know that you have a friend here if you need to talk. Although we think that we are meant to walk this path alone...we are joined by friends to help us bear our heavy loads.
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Re: My Hearts Last Beat
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by venkat on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 08:39:53 AM AEST
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I am at loss of words..this is breath taking..I pray this should be limited to feelings of a poet in writing..
God blees you love and happiness:-)venkat |
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Re: My Hearts Last Beat
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by crmnlilbruno on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 04:54:11 PM AEST
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Well Writen, and also hope that this is just a writing,
For I will reach out my hand
In your direction to help you stand
You can talk to us in times of need
For poetry is someting our emotions feed
Just keep the good writes comming, This one is GREAT.. once again hope it is just a write cause i am hoping ot see many more like it comming from you 8) Aaron D. Carman |
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Re: My Hearts Last Beat
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 11:52:46 PM AEST
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Oh my friend so beautiful in its sadness.
It almost made me cry. I am here if you need me,
hugs you tight
Michelle |
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Re: My Hearts Last Beat
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 08:41:15 PM AEST
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You have indeed given life your best, my friend.... and you deserve the best out of life. And believe me when I say, you have lots more heart beats to share.....
Warm hugs..
Jenni |
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Re: My Hearts Last Beat
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by TeRrahiel on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 03:06:05 AM AEST
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| I doubt if a person who didn't experience something terrible could write such a great poem. |
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