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Love?
Contributed by
kismetkills
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Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 05:47:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I never seem to find the words to express how I feel,
I'm tortured inward and out because this pain I cannot heal,
I want to tell you I love you, but it's too hard to say,
And I don't know what to do because this feeling won't go away,
I love it when you're here, I hate it when you're gone,
When you're not around I feel so withdrawn,
I'm not myself, can't you see it's tearing me apart,
I want to tell you I love you so, with every ounce of my heart.
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2009-04-09 05:47:03]
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Re: Love?
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 07:29:09 AM AEST
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Thank you for sharing, this is a sweet poem, well done.
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Re: Love?
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by Scribbler on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 11:46:31 AM AEST
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This, for me anyway, was quite and intense poem. The length of it was perfect and captures the emotion perfectly.
Nice write x |
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Re: Love?
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by crmnlilbruno on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 04:56:50 PM AEST
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| Good write.. Keep up the good work and keep them commng! |
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