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Forever
Contributed by
Jer_Bear
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Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 01:39:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Forever
And still I die, day by day, week by week, slowly, and Forever emotionally alone.
Forever to live without the warm embrace of one who loves me half as much as I love them.
Forever to live without the one who can always puts a smile on my face.
Forever to live without the one who, no matter what, will stick by me.
Forever shall I live with that part of my heart never filled, and die with an eternal gap.
Forever alone until that fateful day in which I pass on, with no to follow me, nor, someone for me to go to in the next world.
Forever, alone.
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Re: Forever
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 02:08:45 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Forever
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 03:05:38 AM AEST
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Very sad and such deep meaning. You conveyed the emotion well with this one.
Tim |
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Re: Forever
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by kismetkills on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 04:38:05 AM AEST
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| so saddening, cheer up skippy! i love you more then i love fudgesickles! (you should feel very blessed) :D |
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Re: Forever
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 05:00:30 AM AEST
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| We are all forever alone, and in sharing that we can be together. |
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Re: Forever
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by Scribbler on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 11:49:31 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed the repetition within this.
I too use a repetitive air when writing and find it to be effective.
An extremely emotional and thought inducing write x |
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Re: Forever
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by 3660Days on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 03:20:59 PM AEST
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| very nice (in a sad way), I especially liked the second-to-last line. |
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