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Jazzman
Contributed by
countrydoc1015
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Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 09:21:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Escaping my human condition
Drifting through filtered rays
Easing closer and closer to the stage
Jazzman about to dally
Moans of sassy tragedy and twilight procession
As a tiger crouching on ivory and brass
Broken shadows dancing
Quite ashes on the floor
Where one's are made of opposites
They're calling out for more
Among cigar tunes in a straight-gin sky
Ushering maidens to line the bar
Misbehaved notes among rhythm and riff
Jazzman hunkering way down
Wails of sax curdles and epileptic frenzy
Muddy waters round' my feet
Deaf mute waiters among dim lit smoke curls
Gathering watered down bourbon and scotch
Hushing faintness crashing gainst' the walls
Dionysus oscillating among smoke bllows
Final slips and then slides, replete on his fruit
Unbridled and tamed Jazzman
Descends with a wobble
In silence, lays down his lute
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Re: Jazzman
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 09:27:48 PM AEST
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There is a lot of differant things going on in this piece, very enjoyable read, thanks.
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Re: Jazzman
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by Elisabeth on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 10:03:07 AM AEST
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| Oh, this is nice and very different from the usual themes you see. Thank you for sharing! |
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