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Let him go to Hell
Contributed by
venkat
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Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
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O man, you have lost pure vision of life on earth
Quenchless in your longings by fraud, conceit
And lust, you are inspired and strive for wealth
Grasping lies for truth and bound to vows impure
Made your goal to satisfy wretched selfish desires
Till you die you will be engrossed in ceaseless anxieties
Being enmeshed by thousand fetters of hopes, steeped
In deep desires and wrath to gather wealth only by
Unjust means you bent on merely to satisfy your lust
You say that you have achieved this one today and
That one next day and another would be won afterwards
You think that you have slain these enemies today and
Those other enemies you shall slay tomorrow because
You are the lord of the wealth and you have a right to kill
the useless men who beg for food and money and mercy.
Scattering gifts among slaves you desire to buy the heavens
Deluded by such ignorance, maddened by anger and lust
Dragged by your greediness; you’re rushing headlong into
The hell but who will save you there when you burn in fires?
25-03-2003
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 09:38:23 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:24:59 PM AEST
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so much conviction! i loved this. thanx for writing this.
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:10:15 AM AEST
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This is intense.Well written great jobas always!!
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by Tanna on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:26:16 AM AEST
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| The title drew me in, and I was wow'ed by the body of it. Excellent write Ven. Very intense. |
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:12:33 PM AEST
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Excellently written verse with a dynamic message, venkat, of an unpleasant reality. May God be the judge, but I pray He be merciful to us who sin, but hope to do better.
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 06:21:11 AM AEST
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Strike them down, let God sort them out, very strong, so pure, the rawest of emotions show through loud and clear, one heck of a write.
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by Gribba on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:16:04 AM AEST
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| marvellous write!!! I like the fact that you can take this poem and just put so many people and situations into the meaning of it... |
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:21:24 AM AEST
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Great write!!!
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 04:16:50 AM AEST
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Dragged by your greediness; you’re rushing headlong into
The hell but who will save you when you burn in the fires?
ah, how absolutely true... again, as usual ::smile::... your writings affect my soul... how truthful this prose is in that it addresses the true greed of those who aim for power, but what next?... my friend, you writings are full of inspiration in the sense that words are powerful... if the right person reads them, possibly we can change... blessings... michele |
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:33:18 AM AEST
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| well feck, as we like to say, the energy in this is immense, another great write, they just seem to pour out of you |
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Re: Let him go to Hell
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:08:09 AM AEST
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| Oh wow. Venkat, this was very good. *S* Cynthia |
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