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Of magic and miracles and little girl daydreams
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 08:13:29 PM in AEST
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As woman looking back
our moments under the sun
years ago running through country meadows
sunflowers touching the heavens
and we were in our magical world.
Sitting on rivers edge
life in tow, little dreams
of princess and things
and our life in castles
riches of all the world
laid beneath our feet.
Those times so simple
but little girls grow up
and life didn't at first glance
bring us the princes we dreamed of.
Grown woman peering back into
child like minds and dreaming
our crystal tears away,
only to be shook abruptly
to look around and know.....
reality has a way to sting us so.
We send notes of late back and forth,
sharing our moments of magic
and tragic and the tears and laughter
that brought us here....
For moments we are back on the bank,
feet in the river and living those long ago dreams
and a summer breeze carries little girl magic away.......
Embracing the fact we are still here
and made it through it all.
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shelby
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Re: Of magic and miracles and little girl daydreams
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 09:06:17 PM AEST
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Well done my friend, you speak only truth through this poem, bravo.(The Phantom tips his hat.)
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Re: Of magic and miracles and little girl daydreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 09:48:47 PM AEST
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| Now that's a really nice poem, Michelle!!! |
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Re: Of magic and miracles and little girl daydreams
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 04:58:06 AM AEST
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"reality has a way to sting us so"..
you are true..welldone dear friend.:-)venkat
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Re: Of magic and miracles and little girl daydreams
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 05:00:24 AM AEST
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Great poem girl.
Guess you both found that you are stronger than your dreams.
Awesome.
big luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Of magic and miracles and little girl daydreams
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 07:20:41 AM AEST
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Great peom indeed. I have to agree with everyone. I think that you have outdone yourself with this one. And with everyword that you wrote here you are absolutely correct.
Reality does have that abiltity to come up behind us when we least expect it and sting us right where it hurts the most. Great job my friend.
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Re: Of magic and miracles and little girl daydreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 03:09:00 PM AEST
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this is captivating writing. it's deep, intelligent and beautiful. the imagery was superb. great work.
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Re: Of magic and miracles and little girl daydreams
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by 3660Days on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 07:53:03 PM AEST
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I quite enjoyed this, the best lines for me were these:
sunflowers touching the heavens
Those times so simple
but little girls grow up
and life didn't at first glance
bring us the princes we dreamed of.
to look around and know.....
reality has a way to sting us so.
For moments we are back on the bank,
feet in the river and living those long ago dreams
and a summer breeze carries little girl magic away.......
Embracing the fact we are still here
and made it through it all.
(the end was especially well written).
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