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From Your Body To My Soul
Contributed by
n2dep2care
on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 04:09:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I left you lie as I took one last look.
The morning was calling me, but for you- the night had not yet ended.
I heard ardent sighs as your body, still heated, glowed in pastel passion.
Your arms, shoulders, neck and back ignited desire which flowed through my fingers
purposely burning a path from your body to my soul, as I laid hands on you and took what was graciously offered. I fell into you and we made love sweet and gentle as the storm ravaged and raged outside our window. Now calm and sweet the morning was calling me. Yet, I heard nothing but your impassioned sigh.
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Re: From Your Body To My Soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 07:09:16 PM AEST
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Unbelievably breathtaking!
*sigh*
You have an amazingly astute ability to take normal, everyday words and
turn them into sensuous, moving, emotive works that stir the body right down
to the core. There is movement inside this that lingers long after the reader is
done with the reading. Like being in a room with scented candles after they've
been blown out.
Beautiful ~
~ Breezy
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Re: From Your Body To My Soul
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by jessb3 on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 09:47:45 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful and full of such passion! I loved reading it. :o) |
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