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Cherry Blossoms
Contributed by
12161216
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Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 06:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Cherry blossoms in the nape of your neck,
I kiss it gently, just a peck,
Strawberries nestled in your hair,
I pick enough so I can share,
Peach juice glistening on your chest,
Licking it is simply the best,
Your eyes like sunflowers,
Your voice like a bird,
Your laugh like bells,
Your mouth that whispers sweet words,
I love you,
I love you,
I love you,
Your body,
Home to sweet scents,
Your kindness,
Never stop giving out compliments,
Your mind,
Sharp as a tack, you are
And your smile
Which brings light to places near and places far,
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12161216
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2009-04-06 18:31:32]
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Re: Cherry Blossoms
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by 3660Days on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 06:43:02 PM AEST
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Some of the rhymes seemed "forced"
the imagery was very nice.
"strawberries nestled in your hair"
and the triple "i love you", almost like an echo. |
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Re: Cherry Blossoms
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 12:07:25 AM AEST
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The title drew me to the poem, this is a nice write.
The entire write made me smile.
Michelle |
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