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Little Cricket
Contributed by
countrydoc1015
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Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 11:33:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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His ballad sets the evenng sun
Bidding all farewell, the day is done
While twilight ushers in the dew
Welcomed chirps that bid adieu
Vastness of dark, and night soon came
Through wind and thunder, he still sang
My quickened heart, forever still
Little friend outside, my wndow sill
Hark! O'er the valley, and the dell
His ballad echoes, all is well
One last refrain, sets evening sun
Bidding all farewell, the day is done
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Re: Little Cricket
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 09:46:43 PM AEST
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Very nice, I like the flow, simple but smooth, thanks for the read.
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Re: Little Cricket
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by crmnlilbruno on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 01:23:35 AM AEST
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| Good work.. Keep em comming |
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Re: Little Cricket
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 10:41:24 PM AEST
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Just as long as he stays outside, right?!
Anyway, yeah, this is really a cool little poem and I enjoyed it thoroughly!!!
Thank you,
Tim |
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