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Visions of My Death
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 08:27:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Visions of My Death
My impending death has been revealed to me
Though the exact hour has yet to be
My death has come by the hands of those I love
The ones I have treated with kid glove
My impending death is being flashed before my eyes
As I stand above my body and watch as only one person cries
My death has revealed the thing I feared to make known
That my heart had no permanent place to call home
Those who I considered my enemies I was able to hold at bay
My loved ones I held close to my heart every day
Trust and caring is all I had on this earth to give
Strange that they are the reasons I will no longer live
My impending death does not make me sad
I am so thankful for the life I have had
The memories are mine to take to the grave
They are the important things I implore you all to save
My impending death must now be close at hand
I feel extremely drained as I make this, my final stand
My last prayer is that God has mercy on me
So when He calls you home, I will be there to see
Deadwriter
04/03/2009
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Re: Visions of My Death
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by ingeniusidiot on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 07:41:25 AM AEST
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you are starting to write like me, my friend. I hope that all is ok. Like you told me...you too have an ear here that is always willing to listen. This was very well written. keep in touch.
Rich |
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Re: Visions of My Death
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by venkat on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 09:20:50 AM AEST
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You have rendered it in a beautiful way..
it has a nice flow..venkat |
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Re: Visions of My Death
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by kismetkills on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 02:12:48 PM AEST
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| that's really deep. it conveys a lot of different emotions for me, mostly despair. i like it a lot. |
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Re: Visions of My Death
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 08:45:15 PM AEST
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Don't like the topic, but the writing is great....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Visions of My Death
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by razorbladekisses on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 11:26:17 AM AEST
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Wow...
I loved this.
It's sad, though. But a fantastic read.
much love,
rbkisses |
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Re: Visions of My Death
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 08:17:44 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this piece of writing. I kind of reminds me of William Blake especially in terms of his "Age of Experience" collection. You are a truly amazing poet!
---Heidi |
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