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Someday
Contributed by
lastwaltz
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Tonight I sing
Tomorrow I will write
Painting will be the next night
Tonight I hide
Tomorrow I will shout
Alcohol will be my next out
Tonight I am numb
Tomorrow I will shake
Next, I will cry out by the lake
A place, a sound, an emotion, a song, a verse, a smell, a motion, a pill, a drink, a dream, a time, a space
These things I seek in your absence's wake
That somewhere I may find a trace
Of the love we had to break
Copyright ©
lastwaltz
... [
2003-03-25 19:05:00]
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Re: Someday
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:36:47 AM AEST
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Wow! great poem. I am not sure exactly what I like about it but it is brilliant.
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Re: Someday
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:43:46 PM AEST
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| great flow and good point:) |
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Re: Someday
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by Gribba on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 06:03:52 AM AEST
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| I like this poem... The sorrow and the pain... wow!!! |
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Re: Someday
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by Lisa_Fisher on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 07:00:02 PM AEST
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| this is amazing this one touches me something about the poem i really like |
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