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The End
Contributed by
lastwaltz
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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She closes her eyes
And opens them
Dead.
Her words roll off cold
And heavy
A thick rush of water from the rooftop
Making a muddled splash
As they crash into my soul
Drawing my heart out through my chest
Like the magician's handkerchief
One
section
at
a
time
Until I can barely
Breathe at all
Afraid.
If the pain stops,
If the handkerchief drops,
Will I ever feel again?
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lastwaltz
... [
2003-03-25 18:45:00]
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 08:48:23 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: The End
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:35:17 AM AEST
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Great poem. I really like this one!!
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Re: The End
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by Gribba on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:51:35 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem... The emotions... WOW!!! This was like writen from my heart.
I like how you don't say to much but just enough to get the message to the reader. |
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