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Opulent De Novo
Contributed by
kye
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Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 07:22:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Beneath an ocean blue; deep-seated in abyss
Lies the drabbest oyster; where cinereal exists
Submersed in limpid waters; patiently obscured
Eager for a grain of sand; an irritant endured
Aloft on winds of destiny, fate brings forth a legacy
Offering tiny sips of lime; timeless in its delicacy
Amidst the blankets Nacre, twirled inside the gloss
Measuring the season; a luminescent is embossed
Cast within this shell, unhurried with delay
An opulent De Novo; evolves in such a way
Caught within a teardrop, a treasure will unfurl
Poised in tranquil nature the saga of the pearl
Life may treat unkindly; tears may mark your heart
Years might bring you lonely; hope seems all for naught
Strength is still evolving and time it slowly heals
Bringing forth the beauty, a teardrop will reveal
If you should discover a pearl inside of you
Hold onto its promise; hope will be renewed
If sadness is your oyster; life is oft unfair
Think about the sand; there’s a reason it’s in there
Copyright ©
kye
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2009-04-03 19:22:13]
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 08:43:32 PM AEST
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Girl when you come back you do it like dynomite.
This is a delicate masterpeice of wisdom.
Awesome girl.
Big huggs, mucho smiles, blessings, joy, peace, luv,
emy |
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by venkat on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 08:45:39 PM AEST
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"Caught within a teardrop, a treasure will unfurl..Bringing forth the beauty, a teardrop will reveal..
If you should discover a pearl inside of you (or in the oyester) . hope will be renewed"...
Dearest poetess..it is the great message..of this "the opulent denovo"..your poem brings forth
the beauty of life..Further I wish to say this is a remarkable poem.
it is a priceless pearl shines light of hope. I love the title and its message.
Blessings and hugs..:-)venkat
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 08:17:05 AM AEST
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This poem seems to have despair and hope intertwined. It provoked many thoughts within me.
And, I do not know why, this line Caught within a teardrop, a treasure will unfurl
just seemed to reach out, grab me, and it said "hey".
Very nice writing, K. :-)
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 08:32:18 AM AEST
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Ah, back again.
*sigh*
Those last two stanzas!!!!!!
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by elle on
Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 10:47:56 AM AEST
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beautifully written. . . spellbinding from beginning to end. the language is a
symphony of word. the message, a reward. thanks for sharing this. peace. elle |
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by 2Deep4U on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:53:01 PM AEST
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i couldn't stop reading it
everytime i read it i found something new that i liked
its an awesome poem
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 06:25:14 AM AEST
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Lovely, poignant metaphor Kye. An enriching read, and most enjoyable.
Spike |
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 06:55:48 AM AEST
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Kye this is absolutely flawless! What a gorgeous metaphor
and the last two stanzas are brilliant! There is boundless
wisdom wrapped up around the beauty of your words.
Very sagely. I could get lost inside this and not care to
ever be found.
Beautifully written, dear poet. ^_^
~ Breezy
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by Ramfire on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 07:07:13 PM AEST
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| Pearls are a great treasure, from the sea or from a life hurting experience. I guess we've all had a couple of those. |
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 05:59:38 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. no wonder its your favourite. Very deep! |
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Re: Opulent De Novo
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 12:49:46 PM AEST
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this is beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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