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We miss You

Contributed by crmnlilbruno on Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 04:44:42 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Looking up into the sky
Saddened with grief
Asking the big question Why
With no sign of relief

Tears falling down the cheek
Bones aching in pain
No one around to hear you speak
No one to keep you sane

Soft words turn to screams
Words fill with emotions
With the feelings of lost dreams
Shattered hearts in motion

Knowing that he will never return
Falling to the knees
Asking what there is to learn
Begging and asking please

Just one more chance to see his face
Just one to say goodbye
Or take me instead in his place
Im not afraid to die

At least do this if for me
Tell him that we will never forget
And we hope that he is free
Even though its not my time yet

We will all be there someday
To say hello and never goodbye
To fish, laugh and play
So until the day that we die
This is all that I can say.......

Aaron D. Carman

Copyright © crmnlilbruno ... [ 2009-04-03 16:44:42]
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Re: We miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 09:43:15 PM AEST
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This write so reminds me of my own father.
He luved fishing, hunting and all those things.
My dad holds me up in luv as he's my angle with mom and many more.
Beautifull and I truly understand with my heart.
luv, huggs, blessings,
emy

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