|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Could You Be The One
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 03:22:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Could you open your eyes, see what's in front of you
Could you let me inside, maybe try something new
Because you are the one, in my dreams, every night
When I close my eyes, you're the one in the light
Could you be there in the dark; could you be my sun
Because I need to know...
Could you be the one...?
I know I'm not the prettiest girl around
And better than me can be found
But you say I'm beautiful, you say it's true
And I don't want anyone else; ask me if I could be the one too!
Because you are that one, in every wish I make
When I close my eyes, dream of you, but then I wake
Thinking could you be the one in my room; but there's none
I miss you so much, and I need to know
Could you be the one
Cause I don't want to run
Into a stranger's arms...
Could you be the one?
Copyright ©
MoonlightKiss
... [
2009-04-03 15:22:03] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Could You Be The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 03:58:29 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a very sweet passionate poem. a vastly enjoyable read!
-phil |
|
|
Re: Could You Be The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 11:23:10 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is really beautifull as it speaks to the heart.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
|
|
Re: Could You Be The One
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 12:33:24 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This has a nice flow to the rhymes.
I like the sentiment too. |
|
|
|