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. . . with my weakness
Contributed by
elle
on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 02:18:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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fragile seed
brought to rest
beside the river of defense.
nearly swept away
on the wings
of my weakness.
& of what is to come?
I caress a subtle feeling
texture of an aliby.
I predict my misbehavior
bled the crypt
but not bone dry.
gesture of a higher ending
nomad stars
to charge the sky.
process of a tender ending
sky of glancing
sideways. . .
sigh. . .
at last I peek
in that direction
sugarcane
honey
& saffron. . .
good-bye. . .
farewell
adieu
good-bye. . .
the gentleman
of time has come.
we've been beyond
a whispers reaching.
& missed the echo
of our echoes
precious collision.
spun. . .
a decibel of kind tuition
decibel of one
undone. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-04-03 14:18:37]
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Re: . . . with my weakness
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 04:04:53 PM AEST
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very dreamy and beautiful. good job.
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Re: . . . with my weakness
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 06:28:44 AM AEST
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An incredible journey Elle. Wonderfully done.
Deadwriter
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