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Good Winter
Contributed by
gusbarney
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Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 05:30:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Good winter you whispered
And the snow fell outside
Fell on concrete and dead leaves
And the quiet dulled the senses
Just as the cold numbed the toes
And the wind called softly
As it caressed the trees
Good winter
Spring to come
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2009-04-03 05:30:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Good Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 04:10:36 PM AEST (User
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a variety of images crammed into a small piece of writing, good work, an enjoyable read.
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Re: Good Winter
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 12:25:40 AM AEST (User
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Welcome to our global family here at YPDC.
Good write.
Spring has sprung here.
beautifull.
Huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy |
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