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Another God poem (Part 67)
Contributed by
fanniesson
on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 08:50:34 AM in AEST
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God must be dead
or in a drunkards sleep.
Your silent prays
won’t awaken him
or pleas for help.
This is the way he
wants the world,
or he’d change it
in a heart beat
of a humming bird.
So pile those bodies
as high as you can.
Woman & children first.
Then torch them
to stop the spread of some
new infectious disease,
he’s bound to blessed us with.
Copyright ©
fanniesson
... [
2009-04-02 08:50:34]
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Re: Another God poem (Part 67)
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 07:16:10 PM AEST
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Accually, not to take away from your poem but burning bodies would spread disease as well. But great poem, oh and god has and never will be dead it's just that he's never been
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: Another God poem (Part 67)
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by ek_da_poet on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 09:02:03 PM AEST
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hey,
i enjoyed this piece very much, expressing your opinion through poetry fascinates me.all i can say is god works in mysterious ways
great write |
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