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whispers
Contributed by
elle
on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 07:44:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am whisper. . . barely spoken
lost good-bye, long overdue.
hope floats down
now multi-coloured
confetti upon the air of truth.
air of expectancy. . .
befriending.
I am awed
by these ghosts of sanity.
shades resembling sweet surrender.
decadence of method used.
somehow reached,
a calm oasis.
synapses bruised by calms' pursuit.
breached & conjuring
sad whispers
pale & serving ill repute.
a tender turning, now my witness.
nomad of a thousand treasons.
misunderstanding. . .
our disease.
just a lonely bit past caring
I attempt to have you care.
careless caring, we absolve this
our embryonic power play
suspending. . .
we trick ourselves into a frenzy
all about a turn we lost.
did I not find you in the hiding
cloaked & ransomed
to our end?
cradle us in understanding
nothing ever to defend.
fancy us as lovers knowing
love loves best
that has no end.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-04-02 07:44:14]
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Re: whispers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 03:16:39 PM AEST
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| Genuinely breathtaking. |
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Re: whispers
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by venkat on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 10:22:03 AM AEST
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Number of beautiful images..excellent use of words..lovely style..I don't comment on the content.
But I feel the poem is enchanting like a fairy of woods who missed her lover:-)venkat
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Re: whispers
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 05:45:48 PM AEST
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light and beautiful once again, good stuff.
-phil |
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Re: whispers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 06:21:51 AM AEST
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| i like the way you use your words. its as if you choose them all carefully rather than the style that alot of us use and write down whatever pops in our heads. i enjoyed reading it. |
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