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Next time they'll listen...
Contributed by
AchingSoul
on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 11:02:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I've been pushed aside by your vanity,
been driven to the edge of my sanity...
Bewildered, dwelling on my anguish,
I don't think I will be languished...
Too feeble to stand up,
I slipped away...
to the land of eternal slumber,
where I'll never feel this somber.
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AchingSoul
... [
2009-04-01 11:02:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Next time they'll listen...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 12:24:15 PM AEST (User
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i liked it, it had a nice rhythm to it. good work.
-phil |
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Re: Next time they'll listen...
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 02:33:05 PM AEST (User
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I know the feeling
well done |
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