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my heart is nothing but a bruise
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
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the day beckons me to rise
but i am not yet ready to awaken
i feel the sounds of silence
my hearts nothing but a bruise
im glad that it feels this way
and i come back to this familiar place
deja vu
so i cant help but love her
she is mine while i am hers
presence in this dying life
the passing of the earth suffice me
that is until she bores me
all i am are ashes of a burnt out love
it takes strength to live the day
it takes the eyes of a blind man
to ignore the pain
i wish i never had to open my eyes
i want to live in a dream where
everything that could never be
somehow is...
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Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:09:09 PM AEST
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Oh wow... nice write! though sad...
"all I am are ashes of a burnt out love" ->> that's a great line! Keep it up!
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Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise
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by darkkai on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:27:11 PM AEST
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wow i feel ya on that poem. wow keep it up
the line " the passing of the earth suffice me
that is until she bores me " i get that way too
it's strange how poetry brings memories
keep 'em coming |
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Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:23:49 AM AEST
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| Woooow .... I love this ... I feel these feelings exactly ... awesome write... Jan |
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Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:33:19 PM AEST
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i want to live in a dream where
everything that could never be
somehow is...
well said, don't we all? theres raw emotion on the surface of this poem, eloquently expressed.
great write, Kate x |
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Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 02:41:10 PM AEST
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Very well writtten why was it brought to you by Coca~Cola? I like the title and I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise
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by Kittenfantastico on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 03:12:07 PM AEST
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| Bows, Very very good. |
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