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Storm {The Beast}
Contributed by
redwest802
on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 12:30:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Silence.
Leaves tremble,
darkness approaches.
Animals scurry from the breeze,
gentle, building, growing.
An untamed beast,
fighting, escaping.
Tears shed
large, wet, falling.
A blinding flash.
An horrendous roar,
terror unleashed on Earth.
Sunlight,
soft, calm, welcoming.
nature,
fresh, clean, abounding.
The beast soothed once more.
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redwest802
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2009-04-01 00:30:32]
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Re: Storm {The Beast}
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 12:13:25 PM AEST
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great use of adjectives, especially in this bit:
A blinding flash.
An horrendous roar,
terror unleashed on Earth.
great writing.
-phil |
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Re: Storm {The Beast}
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by HoldOn on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 02:59:07 PM AEST
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| This paints a picture perfectly. nice. |
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Re: Storm {The Beast}
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 01:11:57 PM AEST
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| A nice twist on bad weather, promising! |
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