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You And I (Inside A Dream)
Contributed by
redsleeve
on
Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 06:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I want to steal you away
I know a special place
Follow me
Between the lines
Defining time and space
Come with me, let’s go
If only for tonight
Run with me
Lend your wing,
With mine we can take flight
Building top, Chicago snow
Don’t mind this winter storm
Dance with me
Beating hearts
In sync they keep us warm
Open field in Tennessee
Beneath the clearest skies
Lay with me
Adore the stars,
And I’ll adore your eyes
Hold my hand along the beach
You’re shining past the moon
Walk with me
Say your mine,
For once, this moon is blue...
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redsleeve
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2009-03-31 18:54:30]
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Re: You And I (Inside A Dream)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 07:08:06 PM AEST
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Oh my, red! How gloriously and fantastically R O M A N T I C !!
This is definitely what dreams may come. Whoa! *fans self* what an enticing
journey. I simply ADORE the forth stanza, especially the last two lines. My goodness,
how positively beautiful and musing. This is definitely a favourite of mine.
A breathtaking read ~
~ Breezy
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Re: You And I (Inside A Dream)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 12:08:20 PM AEST
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a vast array of images intersected with some passionate, warm emotion. i really enjoyed reading this, great work.
-phil |
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