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as silence echoes
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 09:43:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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on sharing
fragments of myself
with you
& without. . .
I can find no pleasure
while I know
that you are hurt.
a celestial heart floats
tentatively
over thoughts
I love to have of you.
a never ending vigil.
I am content
as silence echoes
falling in upon itself. . .
confessions
ache towards my growth.
my prismed reaching
to my amazement
constant
aquisition. . .
there are worlds
within our worlds.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-03-30 09:43:14]
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Re: as silence echoes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 09:52:14 AM AEST
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I would use the word "dreamy" but I don't use that word. :-) It just reads like a dream to me. You know, how dreams can just change, instantly, yeah, like that. Any which way, you know I'm a big fan.
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Re: as silence echoes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 01:09:06 PM AEST
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great stuff once again, beautiful writing.
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Re: as silence echoes
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by venkat on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 11:23:29 PM AEST
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Good..this is good..I am amused to see different phases of your emotion..now you are on bright side of your nature...
God bless happiness. venkat
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Re: as silence echoes
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by freckle on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 12:31:39 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. I believe you are right; that there are worlds within our worlds. Very cool!
Thanks for sharing this!
Carol |
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