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rainy night
Contributed by
kims4ever
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Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 03:36:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Rain begins to fall from the moonlit sky,
I see an angel and begin to cry,
For all my thoughts, hopes, and dreams,
I would never have thought I could help and angel get it's wings.
She peers into my heart body and soul,
But when I see her I lose control,
I wish to hold her and all her love,
But even I dare not taint the stars above,
Her smile so warm, it makes me cry,
To lose her love would be all but to die,
Her cheeks like a rose, her porcelain skin,
To even think of her, feels like a sin,
I can't stop thinking of her, I really don't know why,
But I will always remember her, on that rainy moonlit night.
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kims4ever
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Re: rainy night
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by Boopa0213 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:43:02 PM AEST
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| this was a very good poem. I like the way you right. Let me know some of your other poems I would like to read them. Have a good one. |
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Re: rainy night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:00:47 PM AEST
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| HEYHEY HEY..well im just posting one comment for all the poems and well theyre great! Oh and this is chelsea from your phyics class..but hey i got to go ill talk to you in physics byebye! |
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Re: rainy night
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by kims4ever on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 09:12:53 PM AEST
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| Hi, thankyou for the encouragement and the titles of my others are the following: My gift, my world, my prison within, the darkness, jack and his beanstalk, and when. |
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Re: rainy night
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:26:45 AM AEST
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Hey Kim,
You don't know me but I had seen a poem of yours and taken the time out to read it. I like it very much. I think your better than me. What do I know when I am not even perfect |
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Re: rainy night
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:20:30 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful poem. You write wonderfully...
sleepless_siren |
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