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I die with a smile on my face
Contributed by
solidsnake116
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Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 01:03:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Im sitting alone in a dark room
I look to the left, and i see my six year old self hanging from a street light by my neck. My body is limp and covered in blood.
I look to the right and my six year old self is riding a bicycle on a sunny day.
I look left again and see my 15 year old corpse, rotten and swollen with maggots.
I look to the right and see my 15 year old self standing alone, not sad but not happy either.
I look left again and my myself at my current age of 18 gutted and dismembered. Insane men are waving my body parts around and drinking the blood in celebration.
I look right and see my 18 year old self lying in a pool of my own blood with a knife sticking out of my neck. The fake me isn't quite dead yet, as i can hear him struggling to try and breathe, which only causes blood to spurt out even faster.
Everywhere i look all i see is my own death, so i close my eyes.
And i see lucifer, he is not a beast but a souless man with black eyes.
The images of death and horror become to much for me, so i open a drawer and pull out a pistol.
I place the gun to my head and pull the trigger, splattering skull fragments and chunks of my brain all over the walls.
I die with a smile on my face.
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Re: I die with a smile on my face
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 06:31:08 AM AEST
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shockingly vivid. possibly the worst nightmare anybody could possibly have. you conveyed the full horror of it brilliantly.
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Re: I die with a smile on my face
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 09:22:25 AM AEST
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Scary as only hell can be,I guess!
Thank you for sharing your nightmares.
Let's hope that they are not contagious.
Exciting to read!
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