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The world still goes round
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 11:57:23 PM in AEST
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Last two lines not really part of the poem it's self but I thought of it because of this poem so I put it in there tell me if you think it fits. Or if it doesn't sound right
What does it all mean?
Life to me seems obscene
You live you die
Only a few stop to cry
But once you've left this place
You’ll notice something you want to tell the human race
We all live and die
We all laugh, smile, and cry
People die thinking their heaven or hell bound
They think people will mourn for their loss
But really the truth is the world still goes round
And as time goes on your memory will be lost
I still don't know what it all means
But is this the answer for me
You live you die
People mourn for your loss
But your memory will be lost
Because in life the world will keep going around
Time move on with out us
Better catch up fast
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Voice of the Silent
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Re: The world still goes round
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by venkat on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 02:18:10 AM AEST
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Time moves on..O.K,
"Better catch up fast"...What?..
meaning is vague..
The main poem is O.k..it is a very good read just as your previous poem about dissolution of life on earth...
go on write more..venkat |
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Re: The world still goes round
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 06:33:04 AM AEST
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i think it all worked well. it's basically what i think about life as well, and you conveyed it excellently.
-Phil |
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