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Death of your Fake Love!

Contributed by majesticpoet on Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 11:48:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

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I thought I loved you, you hated me
You gave me so much hate i didnt see
It buried me, and these tears are deadly.
You feel that?
I feel bad I feel sad?

It was my heart, you took its life, this pain was from your knife.
This night, it dies, in my truth and your lies.
And it`s true, I hurt too, remember that I loved you.

Obsessed with the loss of you, the hate continued and grew
How could you have done this to ME?
Look at All I did for you, the world is what I gave to you.
Now im just stuck, my head is so messed up,
Look at my arms and see the map of my life
in the pattern of my cuts.

So watch my chest heave as my last breath leaves
I will no loger be what you're dying to see
Forever was not for us hate is what you gave me

Now for you I have no trust nor do I carry any lust
So let this gun bond us and once we are just dust
You will know that I had once loved us.

Now we are here at the end, at the end of the hurt
now you see that the pain ain't the same
when it's your turn to burn!

I can not stand who you made me
This man with this fresh blood on my hands
With all this blood I am damned
I'll scatter the ashes as my heart crashes

You tried to take me and make me
weakened then wouldnt save me, save me.
this is the hate that you gave me
Sings out the same words for you to see;

I’m breaking, I’m feeling, I’m naked, I’m kneeling
I’m shaking, I’m reeling My god you keep bleeding
I watched you die through my crimson filled eyes
You cry, it turns to night
You die, I see the light

Now you can see my pain, I’m NOT Sorry
Good bye , Goodnight, Good riddance
For once I wont cry tonight !

Copyright Â© majesticpoet ... [ 2009-03-29 23:48:47]
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Re: Death of your Fake Love! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 06:36:47 AM AEST
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very impressive. it flows along very well and was a powerful read. great work.

-phil

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