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hollow monument
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 10:18:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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magnet of disregard. . .
baby, oh baby in the closet
you'll fit, so perfectly
into the adulterated version.
enter in.
pace yourself
brace yourself
hard as steel
hard to swallow. . .
deceit packaged as lies.
shelved
pushed back
label bleeding lies.
beware the infantile print.
you'll be smitten
by the smaller,
absurd ambiguities.
caustic
toxic
tested on humanities.
geiger counter, ticking.
malfitting.
no pledge can soften
no shadow cast
can reconfigure, radically.
baby of the stick figure
how do you reach
your destiny???
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-03-29 22:18:21]
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Re: hollow monument
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 11:07:29 PM AEST
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Very creative, thought prevoking work of art.
Huggs, blessings, peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: hollow monument
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by venkat on
Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 11:21:38 PM AEST
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"pace yourself ,brace yourself,hard as steel hard to swallow. . .you'll be smitten by the smaller, absurd ambiguities.caustic toxic,
tested on humanities..no pledge can soften, no shadow cast can reconfigure'"...
I don't know who is this baby of the stick figure..but this poem is beautifully dark and smites like steel on the face of the baby...
very powerful.:-)venkat
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Re: hollow monument
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 01:03:18 AM AEST
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| This one scared me. Perhaps I should not print it publicly why, but it did. But if I'm right, powerful. |
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Re: hollow monument
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 06:44:21 AM AEST
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your use of words is beautiful and imaginative, great work once again.
-phil |
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